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Post by maria on Nov 7, 2010 12:23:14 GMT -5
*Night Mist* ____________________________________
AGE
4 Years.
GENDER
Mare.
PERSONALITY
Night Mist is a dark mare she prefers the darkness
then the daylight She has a charm and can be
a lady if she wants to' but underneath she is a
spider who spins her net around you.
Do not mess with the sparrow that lurks
in the shadows because she will hunt you
down.
PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
Night is a vixen a handsome lady of the dark
she has nice features and is curvy on right
places she is not thin nor fat just good
looking every dream fae but dangerous
like the widow spider. Night has long legs
made for running miles and miles.
She has long curly mane and tail and ravising
black eyes that can hypnotize anyone.
HISTORY
Night's Past is all in a blur
she doesn't want to remember it
because it is something evil and
bad her mother was killed by
a brute probably her father or
someone worse.
Night desided to put the past behind her.
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Post by Crow'sia on Nov 8, 2010 23:53:24 GMT -5
I just have to make a comment on the apostrophes which I find rather strange and very misplaced. We do require members to follow the proper conventions of the English language here, to the best of their ability. That said, if you have any trouble with that we would be more than happy to help and it is certainly okay.
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Post by maria on Nov 11, 2010 15:22:28 GMT -5
Fixed.
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Post by Crow'sia on Nov 11, 2010 18:26:47 GMT -5
Thanks Night!
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