A bright night

[lottuke]

The huge stalion galloped over the sandy beach with big steps.
He watsht te sunset above the bright sae, after galloping for a litle while he stopt en lookt back. He finally was happy, he tought.
But aactually he was worried, worried that someting was gonna happen to his familly. But the've chosing that by themself, they diddend wanted him in that herd. To take it of his mind he began to prance and then galloped of. He was acting like he was racing and wen he came verry close to the tree's he stopped because he saw soemone coming out of the bushes. He went standing strong and wxaited.

(ps: sorry i don't speak english so its not gonna be verry good)

[Crow'sia]

OOC: That's quite alright! We have to practice to learn. You seem to sound things out well enough, so the writing is understandable. Google Translate is really awesome if you're ever unsure about spelling too. The grammar isn't too bad. We will not punish anyone for having English as a second language. You should still post a profile, just so we can keep track of characters. Here's the board: nightskyequines.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=applications

Teheki

If there was one thing Teheki hated, it was stallions. After all, it had been a stallion who had put that shiny new scar on her shoulder. It had been a stallion who had nearly ruined all of her carefully laid plans. As she watched this one from her place in the trees, prancing like a colt, she actually bristled. Memory was a good tonic for hate. Today, though, the mare pushed those feelings away, right into her hooves. She had been surprised to find anyone on the Floodplain, although this part of the beach was still relatively undamaged. Curiosity, it seemed, could quell even Teheki's emotion.

He seemed friendly enough, however, so she felt very little fear in emerging from the shadows when he approached. Teheki tossed her head, clearing her white fur from her eyes, and stared, none too friendly. "This is a strange place for a stallion," she said slowly. "Do you live here?"

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